Anasia




Zhong Guo and Hambao - Anasia

final draft 3/25/08
One Sunday a girl named Zhong Guo was doing a sciecne project for her 5th grade. She was working in the big basement of her big green house on this project. She was making a poison that turns small things into bigger things. She spilled the poison in her rat Hambao's rat food because Zhong Gup put it on the counter and as she turned the poison fell in the food. Hambao had began to eat his food and he started to shake. His ear's became big, then his tail ,then he was as big as a rabbit, then a dog, then a cow. As he got bigger Zhong Guo ran up the stairs.

Hambao followed him as he hit the sunlight he became smaller and smaller and smaller. Zhong Guo went in the kitchen to get her mom. When her mother came in the room and saw Hambao she started to screm and jump up and down. Zhong Guo got in trouble and was grounded. Her mother said " Zhong Guo put that rat in it's cage were it belongs". Then Zhong Guo said, " but it was as big as a cow a minute ago".

When she took him to the cage it was dark still and Hambao became big again. Zhong Guo turned on the light to see where Hambao had went when she did she saw Hambao get smaller. Then she knew that when Hambao is in the dark he gets big but when his in the sun he gets smaller. Zhong Guo went out side to the playground for 4 hours , when she came back in she forgot all about what had happened. So when she went to bed she turned off the lights. Hambao started to grow big again.

That night when Zhong Guo woke up from a bad dream she had a big hole in her wall from Hambao smashed through it. Zhong Guo squeezed through the hole and saw Hambao with food and a piece of the couch in his mouth. Her mom came out of the kitchen with a glass of water and dropped it and had a heart attack and pased out . When she came to see Hambao as big as two cows put together.

Zhong Guo had went out the house for help she yelled, " Some one call 911". Nippon , Zhong Guo's friend, came out and said, " here you go but first why call 911"? Zhong Guo said, “because my mom had a heart attack and pased out”. Everyody on Oak street came out to see Zhong Guo on her knees crying. Nippon yelled, " It is ok you can go back in your houses".

Nippon said, "do you want me to go in the house with you to try to wake your mom up"? Zhong Guo said, " We can try". The two kids went in the house when Nippon saw Hambao he said," cool". They saw Zhong Guo's mom still on the floor. They through water on Zhong Guo's mother she woke up.

They had found out that she just pased out. Zhong Guo turned on the light to make Hambao smaller. Nippon had sleep over Zhong Guo's house. They woke up and got dressed and brushed there teeth. Zhong Guo was still getting dressed Nippon said, "come on Zhong Guo so we are not late for school".

The two kids went out the door when Zhong Guo was done. They had walked to school together the hole time Nippon talked about Hambao. Zhong Guo said," stop talking about that don't you want to talk about were you live at"? Nippon said, "No I don't want to talk about St.Louis". So they both walked to school as quiet as a bug.

10 minutes later they made it to their big red school just in time to eat breakfast and get in there class line. When they got in the line the bell was just about to ring. They had made a promise to not tell anybody about Hambao.
That afternoon everybody was in a big circle around Nippon because he was telling about Hambao. Zhong Guo had to squeeze through everybody. When she got to the middle she said," ok this story is over". When everybody was gone Zhong Guo got mad and told Nippon not to talk to her again. The bell rang again for dismissal.

Zhong Guo and Nippon didn't go home together. When Zhong Guo got home she went right to her basement. She spent all day and night working on a poison to make small things not to became big at any time. She got it right on the 10 time she did it. She had used the poisons on a box .

After she got it right she spilled the poison in the rat food and put it in her dark room. When Hambao came in and started to eat it she closed the door. 5 minutes later she opened the door and turned on the light. She found Hambao put him in her hand and turned off the light to see if it worked. It worked really well she was so happy. She heard the door bell ring so she put Hambao in his cage and answerd the door it was Nippon. Zhong Guo said, " what do you want"? Nippon said," for you and me to be freinds again ". He said " I am sorry in a singers voice 100 times" . Zhong Guo had finally told him yes and gave him a hug!

The End






first draft

Zhong Guo and Hambao


One Sunday a girl named Zhong Guo was doing a sciecne project for her 5th grade. She was working in the basment of her house on this project. She was makeing a poison that turns small things into bigger things. She spilled the poison in her rat Hambao's rat food because Zhong Gup put it down and as she turned the poison fell in the food. Hambao had began to eat his food and he started to shake. His ear's became big, then his tail ,then he was as big as a rabbit, then a dog, then a cow. As he got bigger Zhong Guo ran up the stairs.

Hambao followed him as he hit the sunlight he became smaller and smaller and smaller. Zhong Guo went in the kitchen to get her mom. When she came in the room and saw Hambao she started to screm and jump up and down. Zhong Guo got in trouble and was grounded. Her mother said " Zhong Guo put that rat in it's cage were it belongs". Zhong Guo said " but it was as big as a cow a minute ago".

When she took him to the cage it was dark still and Hambao became big again. Zhong Guo turned on the light to see where Hambao had went when she did she saw Hambao get smaller. Then she knew that when Hambao is in the dark he get's big but when his in the sun he gets smaller. Zhong Guo went out side to the playground for 4 hours , when she came back in she forgot all about what had happened. So when she went to bed she turned off the lights. Hambao became big again.

That night when Zhong Guo woke up from a bad dream she had a big hole in her wall from Hambao walking through it. Zhong Guo squeezed through the hole and saw Hambao with food and a piece of the couch in his mouth. Her mom came out with a glass of water and dropped it and had a heart attack and pased out . Later when she came to see Hambao as big as two cows put together.

Zhong Guo had went out the house for help she yelled " Some one call 911". Nippon Zhong Guo's friend came out and said " here you go but first why call 911"? Zhong Guo said because my mom had a heart attack and pased out. Everyody on Oak street came out to see Zhong Guo on her knees crying. Nippon yelled, " It is ok you can go back in your house".

Nippon said, "do you want me to go in the house with you to try to wake your mom up"? Zhong Guo said, " We can try". The two kids went in the house when Nippon saw Hambao he said," cool". They saw Zhong Guo's mom still on the floor. They through water on zhong Guo's mom she woke up.

They found out that she just pased out. Zhong Guo turned on the light to make Hambao smaller. Nippon had sleep over Zhong Guo's house. They woke up and got dressed and brushed there teeth. Zhong Guo was still getting dressed Nippon said, "come on Zhong Guo so we are not late for school".

The two kids went out the door when Zhong Guo was done. They had walked to school together the hole time Nippon talked about Hambao. Zhong Guo said," stop talking about that don't you want to talk about were you live at"? Nippon said, "No I don't want to talk about St.Louis". So they bth walked to school as quiet as a bug.

10 minutes later they made it to school just in time to eat and get in there line. When they got in the line the bell was just about to ring. They had made a promise to not tell anybody about Hambao.
That afternoon everybody was in a big circle around Nippon because he was telling about Hambao. Zhong Guo had to squeeze through everybody. When she got to the middle she said," ok this story is over". When everybody was gone Zhong Guo got mad and told Nippon not to talk to her again. The bell rong agan for dismissal.

Zhong Guo and Nippon didn't go home together. When Zhong Guo got home she went right to her basment. She spent all day and night working on a poison to make small things not to became big at any time. She got it right on the 10 time she did it. She had used the poisons on a box .

After she got it right she spilled the poison in the rat food and put it in her dark room. When Hambao came in and started to eat it she closed the door. 5 minutes later she opened the door and turned on the light. She found Hambao put him in her hand and turned off the light to see if it worked. It worked really well she was so happy. She heard the door bell ring so she put Hambao in his cage and answerd the door it was Nippon. Zhong Guo said, " what do you want"? Nippon said," for you and me to be freinds again ". He said " I am sorry in a singers voice 100 times" . Zhong Guo had finally told him yes and gave him a hug!

The End