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Ole Rose Mountain

Final draft 3/25/08
It was a chilly day in Pork Belly
Colorado when Johnny a 13 year old kid was living with his Grandpa Jack on Ole Rose Mt. He was chopping wood for the winter . Just when........ his grandpa yelled for him!.!.!.! What grandpa? Johnny will you hand me that starter over there on the shelf ? WHEW THIS STARTER IS SO HEAVY!!! here you go grandpa. Thanks Johnny. it's done " yelled grandpa" ....... Grandpa what is so important about winning the car show??" said Johnny. "The reason I want to win the car show is so I can win D.J.Dinkleberg's car and rub it in his face. Speaking of the devil here he is!!!
Your grandson has quite a mouth doesn't he? Like you don't
Johnny went back to chopping wood and when Johnny cut the log in half one half hit Dinkleberg in the back and he fell face first to the dirt driveway!! Dinkleberg drove away like a mad cow which was very funny.

That night Grandpa Jack told Johnny a story about Ole Rose Mt. being mined 20 years ago for silver. When they were half way done mining out the whole Mountain the ceiling of the cave fell in and killed 99% of the workers mining! Who were left? Me!!!
Now go to bed.

The next morning Johnny ran to an air shaft at the mine and climbed down into the silver cave. When he got in side he tripped over an old Coleman lantern. He picked it up and lit it with a flint that he always keeps in his pocket for emergencies.
The silver walls surrounding him were like thousands and thousands of mirrors and lights shining down on him. He turned down the lantern so he could see to explore the beautiful beautiful cave. WOW this is so awesome "said Johnny" I wish grandpa could see this. But Johnny didn't know Grandpa was watching his every move. Johnny heard something hit the ground, it was Grandpa's necklace! Johnny went over and picked it up he knew it was Grandpa's so he yelled GRANDPA and it sounded like the reverb on an amp. Johnny climbed out of the cave and met his grandpa at the surface. Johnny you are to not go down there again...... as Johnny said o.k. he crossed his fingers behind his back!!! While They walked home grandpa told Johnny that the only reason he was alive was because he took a brake and went to his house to cook something to eat


That night grandpa told Johnny that tomorrow was the car show and not to stay up very late.......though he did anyway!!! After he thought grandpa was asleep but really not Johnny crept out of the house to the mines. When he climbed inside and his grandpa spied on him the air shaft ceiling collapsed and they were both trapped inside the mine!!! Grandpa walked up behind Johnny and spooked him. Johnny fell to the ground with a thin blanket of silver dust that looked like glitter in the night sky. Get up "said grandpa" when Johnny stood up grandpa started to talk about what he said about not being aloud to come down here and now both of us are trapped.!.!

Luckily I know a secret way out of this place but we can’t see anything “said grandpa”. They bent. down on their knees and they felt hay and sticks Johnny remembered the flint in his pocket..... Johnny said we can make a bond fire so we could see and we could make torches so we could see to get out !!!!!! Johnny start picking up sticks and hay so we can make it now “said grandpa”!!!!!!! After they built a pile of tender even with an air pocket so it will last a wile till it burns out.... We also need to sweep away the silver powder so it does not melt but you can put some dirt and rocks around it so it doesn't spread “said grandpa”.!.!.!.!.! Johnny grabbed the flint out of his pocket struck it a few times and lit the fire..... The fire must of been at least 6 or 7 feet tall !!!!!!!! Johnny saw a long stick in a puddle of water perfect Johnny mumbled to himself....... He picked it up and broke it in half!!!!! The stick was as big as a base ball bat but twice as long and rotted !!!
Grandpa took off his shirt ripped it in half and had just remembered he left a bottle of 80 proof whiskey in his pocket Grandpa soaked the shirt in the whiskey and wrapped it around the sticks...... After soaking them in whiskey for a few more minutes grandpa stuck them over the fire and they whooshed into flames. Both grandpa and Johnny threw dirt on the fire and put it out with a blanket of smoke!!!!!!!

Grandpa handed Johnny a torch and started walking toward the passage............ About 30 minutes later they reached the passage!!!!!! Grandpa froze for a second...... He back flashed from working in the mine when he was young!!! Johnny asked him what was the matter but grandpa ignored him and kept on climbing through the passage! Come on Johnny "said grandpa" we need to hurry it up and fast. Uh grandpa I still don't get what is so important about winning D.J.'s car from the car show??? Just keep climbing through the passage Johnny I don't feel like explaining it right now at this moment!!!! Sorry , Just keep climbing Johnny..... When they got to the house it was about
2:30 A.M..... and they went to bed.

That night there was a hail storm and the next morning the car show was postponed until the next day........ But grandpa and Johnny were not informed of it and they got up at
7:00 AM SHARP Got dressed and drove down to town square where the car show was supposed to be but no body was there. So they went to the police station and asked the sheriff why there was no won at the car show ????? The "sheriff said" the reason the car show is not open because of the hail storm last night!!!!! So there's no car show sheriff ?????No it was postponed for tomorrow. Thanks sheriff!!.!.!.!.!.! Grandpa and Johnny went to bed at about 8:32 A.M. and woke up at 7:23 P.M to cut some more wood.!.! And went to bed again!!!! The next morning they went to the car show and Grandpa won first place in a drag race vs. D.J Dinkleberg and won his car plus two strangers cars because they bet Grandpa their cars in a game of poker and lost them!!!

When they got home Grandpa just kept staring and staring at his two new cars like they were a 1,000,000 bucks they practically were but still he loved them. Five years later grandpa became a professional drag racer and now had over 100 cars and Johnny got a degree in cave exploring and D.J. never spoke to them again but that was even better!!!!!!!


.................I am done Lachlan -- From Creighton








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It was a chilly day in Pork Belly Colorado when Johny a 13 year old kid was living with his Grandpa Jack on Ole Rose Mt. He was chopping wood for the winter . Just when........ his grandpa yelled for him!.!.!.! What grandpa? Johny will you hand me that starter over there on the shelf ? WHEW THIS STARTER IS SO HEAVY!!! here you go grandpa.Thanks Johny. it's done " yelled grandpa" ....... Grandpa what is so important about winning the car show??" said Johny. "The reason I want to win the car show is so I can win D.J.Dinkleberg's car and rub it in his face. Speaking of him here he is !!!
Your grandson has quite a mouth doesn't he? Like you don't
Johny went back to chopping wood and when Johny cut the log in half one half hit Dinkleberg in the back and he fell face first to the dirt driveway!! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA!

That night Grandpa Jack told Johny a story about Ole Rose Mt. being mined 20 years ago for silver. When they were half way done mining out the whole Mountain the ceiling of the cave fell in and killed 99% of the workers mining! Who were left? Me Johny !!!
Now go to bed.


The next morning Johny ran to an air shaft at the mine and climbed down into the silver cave. When he got in side he tripped over an old Coleman lantern. He picked it up and lit it with a flint that he always keeps in his pocket for emergencies.
The silver walls surrounding him were like thousands and thousands of mirrors and lights shining down on him. He turned down the lantern so he could see to explore the beautiful beautiful cave. WOW this is so awesome "said Johny" I wish grandpa could see this. But Johny didn't know Grandpa was watching his every move. Johny heard something hit the ground , it was Grandpa's necklace! Johny went over and picked it up he knew it was Grandpa's so he yelled GRANDPA and it sounded like the reverb on an amp. Johny climbed out of the cave and met his grandpa at the surface. Johny you are to not go down there again...... as Johny said o.k. he crossed his fingers behind his back!!! While They walked home grandpa told Johny that the only reason he was alive was because he took a brake and went to his house to cook something to eat and if he did not take the brake his dead corpse would be rotting on the floor of the mine this very moment !!!!!


That night grandpa told Johny that tomorrow was the car show and not to stay up very late.......though he did anyway!!! After he thought grandpa was asleep but really not Johny crept out of the house to the mines. When he climbed inside and his grandpa spied on him the air shaft ceiling collapsed and they were both trapped inside the mine!!! Grandpa walked up behind Johny and spooked him. Johny fell to the ground with a thin blanket of silver dust that looked like glitter in the night sky. Get up "said grandpa" when Johny stood up grandpa started to talk about what he said about not being aloud to come down here and now both of them are trapped.!.!


Luckily I know a secret way out of this place but we cant see anything Johny boy. They bent down on their knees and they felt hay and sticks Johny remembered the flint in his pocket..... Johny said we can make a bond fire so we could see and we could make torches so we could see to get out !!!!!! Johny start picking up sticks and hay so we can make it now !!!!!!! After they built a pile of tender even with an air pocket so it will last a wile till it burns out.... We also need to sweep away the silver powder so it does not melt but you con put some dirt and rocks around it so it doesn't spread.!.!.!.!.! Johny grabbed the flint out of his pocket struck it a few times and lit the fire..... The fire must of been at least 6 or 7 feet tall !!!!!!!! Johny saw a long stick in a puddle of water perfect Johny mumbled to himself....... He picked it up and broke it in half!!!!! The stick was as big as a base ball bat but twice as long and rotted !!!
Grandpa took off his shirt ripped it in half and had just remembered he left a bottle of 80 proof whiskey in his pocket Grandpa soaked the shirt in the whiskey and wrapped it around the sticks...... After soaking them in whiskey for a few more minutes grandpa stuck them over the fire and they whooshed into flames. Both grandpa and Johny threw dirt on the fire and put it out with a blanket of smoke!!!!!!!



Grandpa handed Johny a torch and started walking towward the passage............ About 30 minutes later they reached the passage!!!!!! Grandpa froze for a second...... He back flashed from working in the mine when he was young!!! Johny asked him what was the matter but grandpa ignored him and kept on climbing through the passage! Come on Johny "said grandpa" we need to hurry it up and fast.Uh grandpa I still don't get what is so important about winning D.J.'s car from the car show??? Just keep climbing through the passage Johny I don't feel like explaining it right now at this moment!!!! Sorry , Just keep climbing Johny..... When they got to the house it was about 2:30 A.M..... and they went to bed.


That night there was a hail storm and that morning the car show was postponed until the next day........ But grandpa and Johny were not informed of it and they got up at 7:00 AM SHARP Got dressed and drove down to town square where the car show was supposed to be but no body was there. So they went to the police station and asked the sheriff why there was no won at the car show ????? The "sheriff said" the reason the car show is not open because of the hail storm last night!!!!! So there's no car show sheriff ?????No it was postponed for tomorrow. Thanks sheriff!!.!.!.!.!.! No thank you!.!.!.!.! Grandpa and Johny went to bed at about 8:32 A.M. and woke up at 7:23 P.M to cut some more wood.!.! And went to bed again!!!! The next morning they went to the car show and Grandpa won first place in a drag race vs. D.J Dinkleberg and won his car plus two strangers cars because they bet Grandpa their cars in a game of poker and lost them!!!

When they got home Grandpa just kept staring and staring at his two new cars like they were a 1,000,000 bucks they practically were but still he loved them. Five years later grandpa became a professional drag racer and now had over 100 cars and Johny got a degree in cave exploring and D.J. never spoke to them again but that was even better!!!!!!!

.................I am done Lachlan -- From Creighton