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The Pig Keeper Becomes a Hero - Joshua - final draft
Once there was a pig keeper who's name was Lusoe (lu so) Inward. Lusoe Inward had a pig named Pililize (pill li lize) and they lived in London, England in a castle. One night it was storming and Pililize ran out of the castle because she was so scared. The next day Lusoe woke up and found out that Pililize was not in her wooden bed. So he went looking for Pililze then he saw pig tracks in the mud leading out of the castle. Since Pililize was the only pig in the castle Lusoe knew that they were Pililze's tracks. He was so frightened of what could happen to Pililize . Lusoe Inward said "I hope I find her".

Then Lusoe Inward ran out of the castle gate. All he took with him is food and a knife and his back pack. When he got in the woods he tried to think where a pig would go. But he had no clue!! Were a pig would go. Then he came up with an idea if pigs eat a lot… So he went to find some food be every thing he found the pig was not there. But then he heard squealing. Then he followed the sound. When he found her she was captured by hunters!!! So he followed the hunters into a slaughter house. Then Lusoe ran inside the slaughter house and hide behind a table with an axe hanging above the axe looked like it was just sharpened and meet pieces were still were still sliding down it and something was dripping down it. That made Lusoe so scared I think he wet his pants. Run behind a hook with raw buffalo meat. Next he ran into a room full of hooks, some had meat some did not. He heard A loud squealing. Suddenly he went out from behind the buffalo out and cut the rope that was holding his pig the man yelled thief!!!!!!!! When the guy was done yelling Lusoe was out. Using what was left of the rope to keep the pig from running away then they heard the hunter chasing them since the hunters did not belong to the castle he told a guard that men were coming. Then the guard told the other guards the men are coming then the guards closed the gate. The boy heard the hunters trying to get in and he ran inside the house. Now the pig was safe but this time the boy put the pig in a little area with a tall fence so the pig would not leave again.

The End Your friend Joshua 3-25-08







First draft:
Once there was a pig keeper who's name was Lusoe (lu so) Inward. Lusoe Inward had a pig named Pililize (pile li lize)and they lived in London, England in a castle, One night it was storming and Pilillize ran out of the castlle because she was so scared. The next day Lusoe woke up and found out that Pililize was not in her wooden bed. So he went looking for pililze then he saw pig tracks in the mud leading out of the castle. Since Pililize was the only pig in the castle Lusoe knew that they were Pililze's tracks. He was so frighten of what could happen to Pililize . Lusoe Inward said "I hope I find her".

Then Lusoe Inward ran out of the castle gate. All he took with him is food and a knife and his back pack. When he got in the woods he tried to think where a pig would go. But he had no CLUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! were a pig would go. Then he came up with an idea if pigs eat a lot. So he went to find some food be every thing he found the pig was not there. But then he heard squealing.Then he followed the sound.When he found her she was captured by hunters!!! So he followed the hunters into a slaughter house.Then Lusoe went inside. The slaughter house was a big place. Then Lusoe ran inside the slaughter house and hid behind a wooden table with a ax hanging above it. Then Lusoe ran behind a hook with raw buffalo meat. Next he ran into a room full of hooks, some had meat some did not. He heard A loud squealing.suddenly he went out from behind the buffalo out and cut the rope that was holding his pig the man yelled thief!!!!!!!! When the guy was done yelling Lusoe was out. Using what was left of the rope to keep the pig from running away then they heard the hunter chasing them since the hunters did not belong to the castle he told a guard that men were coming then the guard told the other guards the men are coming then the guards closed the gate then the boy heard the hunters trying to get in then the boy ran inside the house now the pig was safe but this time the boy put the pig in a little area with a tall fence so the pig would not leave leave again.

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Joshua 2-19-08