Kalin

The Sudden Sealed Cave!







Kalin

The Sudden Sealed Cave!

In
South Dakota an amazing mountain is there called Mount Rushmore. Mont Rushmore is a famous Mountain that has 4 different presidents carved in the Mountain. The presidents are 1 Washington, 2 Lincoln, 3 Jefferson and president Roosevelt. here is where a lot of mystery’s lye .One steaming hot blue summer day on August 17, 1997. Scarlet and her two sisters Starfire and Doris asked their dad if they could go visit Mont Rushmore. They said" We could go together. Their dad said, "You read my mind girls".
So they set off to
Mount Rushmore. When they got out of the car they were at the foot of the giant Mont Rushmore. When they reached the top they found a strange cave going through the one and only George Washington's eye.

They began to walk in the Dark, Spocky, Damp cave.
Doris said " I'm scared" What's that BBOOMM CCRRAASSHH they were sealed in the strange cave with bats and slithering. We are trapped said Scarlet I know, said Starfire.

Next they set off looking for a way out. All of a sudden Scarlet felt water but there was slimy mud that went to her knees. They stumbled through the drastic, slimy, mud. At last they reached the other side
Doris said 'YEAH".

They set off once more on their terrific journey through the caves. The thick dark walls seamed to be getting darker. And a bit spookier. At once
Doris began to hear chirps of baby Robbins. Starfire began to see light it was coming from the one the only Abraham Lincoln's nose.
They scrambled to the light and climbed out of Abraham Lincolns rocky bumpy nose and there at the foot of Mont Rushmore was the little blue hummer waiting.





first draft -
In South Dakota a famous mountain is there called Mont Rush More. One hot summer day in August. Scarlet and her two sisters Stair fire and Doris asked there dad if they could go to Mountain Rush More.
They said"we could go together. Their dad said "you read my mind girls". So they began to Mountain Rush More. when they got out of the car they were at the foot of Mont Rush More. when they reached the top they fond a cave going through George Washington's eye.They began in the Dark,Socky,Damp cave. Doris said " I am scared"Whats that BBOOMM CCRRAASSHH they were seild in the cave. We are traped said Scarlet I knows aid star fire.Next they set off looking for a way out. All of a soden Scarlet felt water but there was slimy mud that went to her knees. They stumbeld through the drastic slimy mud. Finally they reached the other side Doris said "yeah". They set off once more on their CRAZY journy once more. The thick dark walls seemed to be getting darker. And a bit spookier. At once Doris began to hear chirps of baby robbins. Starfire began to see light it was coming from Mr.Lincoln's nose. They scurried to the light and there sat the car waiting.