Kylie

THE LION AND THE MOUSE
Dear king, I have a story to tell you called The Lion and the Mouse. Once upon a time in Africa a little mouse named Coner was sleeping calmly in his mouse hole in a lion's house named Zorgon. Zorgon was reading the daily newspaper when he heard a little mouse sqeak. Then in zorgons mind he was saying "oh how I would love a yummy mouse sandwich for dinner tonight". So he got out of his large chair and tried to find the mouse. He did so he ran very fast toward the mouse and grabed it with both paws and roared," I'm going to eat you for dinner tonight." Then little Conor the mouse squeaked," don't eat me I can help you!" Then the lion roared "how can you help me?" The mouse said "you will see." So the lion let the mouse go. And the next day the lions claw got stuck in a tree while he was trying to catch a squirrel and no animal in the forest could get the claw out of the tree so he stood there screaming help me help me then the mouse came running toward the lion and said I will help you out of this tree. With his big sharp teeth he chewed the bark off of the tree and set the lion's claw free and the lion and the mouse lived happily ever after in Africa still helping each other out of bad situations.

+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ By Kylie -- 1st draft Dear King I have a story to tell you called The lion and the mouse. Once upon a time a little mouse called Coner was sleeping in his mouse hole in a lions house named Zorgon. Zorgon was reading the newspaper when he heard a mouse squeak. Then in Zorgons mind he was saying "oh I would like a mouse sandwich for dinner tonight." So he got out of his chair and tried to find the mouse. And he did so he ran to the mouse and grabed it with both paws and said "I'm going to eat you tonight." Then little Conor the mouse said "don't eat me I can help you." Then the lion said "how can you help me?" Then the mouse said you will see. So the lion let the mouse go. And the next day the lion's claw got stuck in a tree and no animal in the forest could get the claw out of the tree so the mouse came running tord the lion and said "I will help you ." So with his big sharp teeth he helped the lions claw out of the tree and the lion and the mouse lived happily ever after. Dear Kylie, I heard... that mouse lived hapily ever after.That was very nice. I liked...The whole story!!!!!!! I wonderde...is that th e lion and the mouse. +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ " I heard... that there was a lion that was named zorgon that was going to eat a mouse but the mouse said if you let me go i will help you and the lion said okay and the next day he got his claw stuck and he helped him get away and they were equal.
 * COMMENTS?**

" I wondered... I thought the guy was named something other than zorgon. Also are you sure you made that up.

" I liked... How you used big words and emotions to make the story sound real.

" I have a question about why do you say that it will eat him, and not eat him right there.

" I was looking for an example of a lesson or moral in this not a trust motto. -baskeball4life

Nice story,but how did the lion get his claw stuck in the tree? I'm looking that. -Weird-Al I changed the ands in front of your sentences for you. Weird-Al dear kyle I hered that the mouse live hapily ever after that. I liked that you include africa. I wondered that where is the lion in the picture. Sincerly, Federico ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Dear Fedarico I did a picture that was about me giving the story about the lion to the alien king. So in the picture that is me and giving the story so the king can read it.Do you get it now? sincerely Kylie ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
 * 4-11-07**