Jeff

Jeff -- revised 3/12/07
An old farmer named Jack wanted to prove that cows do talk. Late one night, he went to hide up in the hay loft of the old dirty barn. the cows did,t know that the farmer was watching them.The cows sat in a circil and started to talk and one cow said, " Our owner will die in one year." And then a cow said, oh no!" So the farmer got scared and he fell out of the hay loft and broke his big neck. Never again did people eaves drop on cows on Christmas eve again. all the people thought it was bad luck and the cows kept on talking. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

A oK Good much better. People is spelled rong. but I like how you told the farmers name .But what douse he look like dose he have brown hair or blond.is he strong ro a wimp. Do people think he is crazy? i like how you said in the the old dirty barn. Good, I an see an old dirty barn. read my story and commont

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ By Jeff -- Dear King here is my story. A farmer went to prove that cows can talk. So he went to hide up in the hay loft of the barn on Christmas eve to listen to them. The cows started to talk and one cow said, " our owner will die soon ." So the farmer heard the cow talk and got scared and he fell out of the hay loft and broke his neck. Never again did people eaves drop on cows on Christmas eve again.
 * COMMENTS?

So a person listens to cows, on X-mass eve?

I heard…" A person who heard cows talk and broke his neck.

"I liked…"how the farmer heard the cows and then fell

"I wondered…" could people eaves drop on cows on a normal day why or why not?

"I had a question about…"Was it just him or other people? Did people believe him yes or no?

"I was looking for an example of…what lesson douse this story teach you?

""I liked…" how the farmer never eaves dropped on cows again.

try adding 3 more sentences .What happens to the farmer he might die or became

paralyzed. Is he of his cows now, will he milk them, do the cows Know he eves dropped? A oK Dear Jeff,** ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Dear carla, Well I like to right about funy stuff. carla right me back.
 * did you know that my computer lab teacher has your same name?But why did you write about a farmer and a cow??? I liked your drawing but not so much but I like it it is good on your age. I liked...how the farmer heard the cows. I heard...That the farmer whene it heard the cow he fell and hurt his head.I wondered...Why did you write about a cow and a farmer???I heard...That the farmer hurt his head. Love, Carla Sofia Barjan R.

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