Paul

Paul revised 3-12-07
Dear King, I have a story to tell you king. It is Johnny Apple seed. Johnny Apple seed lived in a long time ago in New England. He carried a bag full of apple seeds, he planted apple seeds too. A war began in 1812 the Indians fougth the British they attacked up and down all day long. Johnny Apple seed ran 26 miles through the forest away from the war. He was famous becuse he planted apples trees. He traveld from state to state planting apples. Because of Johnny Appleseed we have apple trees,apple cider,apple pie and apples for dunking.

+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Paul -- Dear King, I have a story to tell you king. It is Johnny Apple seed. Johnny Apple seed lived a long time ago He planted apple seeds and he carried a bag full of apple seeds. A war began in 1812. The Indians fought the British and they attacked up and down all day long. Johnny Apple seed ran 26 miles through the forest. He was famous because he planted apples trees. He traveled from country to country planting apples. Because of Johnny Apple seed we have apple trees everywhere in the USA.
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" i heard"Some good facts about Johnny Apple seed. Also I learned that he ran 26 miles through the forest. That Johnny Apple seed planted a lot of Apples in the USA. "I liked…" That there was true facts about Johnny Apple seed. "I wondered…" Where did he live? Did he have any brothers or sisters? How old was he ? When did he die? "I had a question about…"Did he plant apples in the USA or the North America? "I was looking for an example of…" Maybe some voice or maybe more. Or maybe just not end it keep going on like what else did he do? " Also some more ideas" that you can use where else did Johnny Apple seed go to plant apples I think he went west? Who told him to head out west to plant apples? What did he wear on his head? Did he wear shoes? What did he look like? Did he have any friends? What kind of friends did he have? What happenend during the war? How long did he live from? How did he keep on getting seeds to plant apples? -Hgymnast P.S Good Job on fixing your writing! -Hgymnast ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ I think that Paul's story has change really well it has some good details. You used some stuff that I told you to use to fix your story. Also Gabby and Emily did a good job fixing there stories! GOOD JOB!

Dear Paul, I heard that in your story their is a war. I liked your Picture because it has alians.And I like alians.I wondered about when did Johnny Appleseed was born and when did he died? I love apple`s!! **I`m staying on Earth!!!** ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
 * Paul`s answer** to **Hgymnast**:4/10/07. He was **born in 1920 & died 1970.** He **lived 50 years.** I had apple cider before have you **?**