Tomeisha

Tomeisha


 * Kristen's New Hamster - final draft 3/27/08 **

Once upon a time there was a girl named Kristen and she had two friends one named Karen and another named Camille. Kristen got a new hamster on February the third 2007. It was a boy his name is Conrad. One day Kristen picked up the phone and called her friend Karen. Kristen said to her,  Do you want to come over to my house and see my new hamster? Karen said  Sure, But what is his or her name? Kristen said,  It is a boy and his name is Conrad''. Karen said,  Okay I'll be right over bye.

After they hung up Kristen called Camille. Kristen said  Hi Camille do you want to come over and see my new hamster?" Camille said  Of course but can you tell me what his or her name is? Kristen said first of all it's a boy and second his name is Conrad. Camille said  Cool name I'll be over in a few minutes bye. So then Camille ran outside and started walking on the way she met Karen. Camille said,  Hi Karen did Kristen invite you to see her hamster too? Karen said,  Yeah. Camille said  We'll she invited me to. So they kept walking on, they were finally there.

Then the door bell rang. Ding dong Kristen opened the door. Then they came in Kristen said,  Come sit over here you can put your coats on that black couch over there. After that they sat down. Kristen told them to make a big circle using both of their legs so that Conrad wouldn't get away. Kristen's mom's name was Paris. Paris called the three girls and they came walking in the kitchen. Paris said to them '' If you want to walk downtown and get an ice cream cone you can because their only fifty cents each. All of the girls said,  Sure.

Then they got their coats and almost went out the door but Kristen said,  Wait did anybody put Conrad in his cage? Then Karen and Camille looked at each other. Karen thought to herself uh oh. Then they both turned around and looked at Kristen. Kristen said,  We'll did you or not? Then Karen and Camille looked at Kristen and shook their heads very slowly and gave Kristen the answer no. After that Kristen said,  You forgot about Conrad? She got really frustrated. Camille said,  It is your responsibility . Kristen just avoided her and ran back inside and she started looking for him. Camille said,  We should help her, I mean come on that would be a nice thing to do. Karen said,  Yeah, lets go. So they started up the stairs to the front door. They opened the front door and walked in. There was Kristen in the living room on the wooden floor searching for Conrad. Kristen asked, Why are you here''? Karen said, Don't be silly were here to help a good friend."

Kristen said, I thought you were mad at me ''. Camille said, Why would we be mad at you ''? Kristen said, Because I yelled at you''. Karen said,  We'll let a little yelling slip past us, I mean come on were not that sensitive but were sensitive . Kristen said,  Do you guy's really mean it . Camille said,  Sure Then Kristen said, '' Oh I almost forgot we have to find Conrad. Camille and Karen both looked at each other and they both said,  We'll help you look . So they took off their coats and lied them on the black couch. Kristen said,  Quick lets look in the attic. So they went up the stairs to Kristen's regular room. Then she said, " Follow me.'' Then Kristen took them to another set of stairs. They started walking up them.

They finally got to the top. Kristen opened the attic door. They walked in with Kristen in front, Camille in second, and Karen in third. They stood there for a second and they heard a noise. The noise was a ruffling noise. They looked to their left and then to their right. On their right they actually saw the ruffling. Kristen ran over there and asked Karen and Camille if they thought they found him. They both said,  Yeah. Then Kristen put her hands on the ruffling newspapers and opened them up. Guess what it was? Conrad was nibbling on a piece of dried up corn. Kristen picked him up and carried him to the living room. She put him in his cage. She told him to never run away again. He went over to his food pan and sat in it but he didn't eat any. Kristen said, Why isn't he eating it looked like he was really hungry when he was in the attic''.

Karen said, did you change the food last week? Kristen said,  No I forgot. Karen said, " Then there you go the food goes bad in only two weeks. Kristen said, " Oh. Camille said,  He ran away because the food went bad and he was hungry so he went to look for some food that was still good. After that Kristen went to get him some more food. Camille said, I better go it's getting dark my mom is probably worried I had fun. It was a real adventure looking for Conrad. Kristen said, Thanks for helping I couldn't of done it without you guys''. Karen said, I had fun to and I agree with Camille it was an adventure finding Conrad ''. So they got their coats. Camille and Karen walked home together. Karen lives closer to Kristen than Camille does so when they got to Karen's house they said goodbye and then Camille was on her own. They all forgot about ice cream because they were to busy trying to find Conrad! The End

Once upon a time there was a girl named Kristen and she had two friends one named Karen and another named Camille. Kristen got a new hamster on February the third 2007. It was a boy his name is Conrad. One day Kristen picked up the phone and called her friend Karen. Kristen said to her,  Do you want to come over to my house and see my new hamster? Karen said  Sure, But what is his or her name? Kristen said,  It is a boy and his name is Conrad''. Karen said,  Okay I'll be right over bye.

After they hung up Kristen called Camille. Kristen said  Hi Camille do you want to come over and see my new hamster?" Camille said  Of course but can you tell me what his or her name is? Kristen said first of all it's a boy and second his name is Conrad. Camille said  Cool name I'll be over in a few minutes bye. So then Camille ran outside and started walking on the way she met Karen. Camille said,  Hi Karen did Kristen invite you to see her hamster too? Karen said,  Yeah. Camille said  We'll she invited me to. So they kept walking on, they were finally there.

Then the door bell rang. Ding dong Kristen opened the door. Then they came in Kristen said,  Come sit over here you can put your coats on that black couch over there. After that they sat down they sat down. Kristen told them to make a big circle using both of their legs so that Conrad wouldn't get away. Kristen's mom's name was Paris. Paris called the three girls and they came walking in the kitchen. Paris said to them '' If you want to walk downtown and get an ice cream cone you can because their only fifty cents each. All of the girls said,  Sure.

Then they got their coats and almost went out the door but Kristen said,  Wait did anybody put Conrad in his cage? Then Karen and Camille looked at each other. Karen thought to herself uh oh. Then they both turned around and looked at Kristen. Kristen said,  We'll did you or not? Then Karen and Camille looked at Kristen and shook their heads very slowly and gave Kristen the answer no. After that Kristen said,  You forgot about Conrad? She got really frustrated. Camille said,  It is your responsibility . Kristen just avoided her and ran back inside and she started looking for him. Camille said,  We should help her, I mean come on that would be a nice thing to do. Karen said,  Yeah, lets go. So they started up the stairs to the front door. They opened the front door and walked in. There was Kristen in the living room on the wooden floor searching for Conrad. Kristen asked, Why are you here''? Karen said, Don't be silly were here to help a good friend."

Kristen said, I thought you were mad at me ''. Camille said, Why would we be mad at you ''? Kristen said, Because I yelled at you''. Karen said,  We'll let a little yelling slip past us, I mean come on were not that sensitive but were sensitive . Kristen said,  Do you guy's really mean it . Camille said,  Sure Then Kristen said, '' Oh I almost forgot we have to find Conrad. Camille and Karen both looked at each other and they both said,  We'll help you look . So they took off their coats and lied them on the black couch. Kristen said,  Quick lets look in the attic. So they went up the stairs to Kristen's regular room. Then she said, " Follow me.'' Then Kristen took off them to another set of stairs. They started walking up them.

They finally got to the top. Kristen opened the attic door. They walked in with Kristen in front, Camille in second, and Karen in third. They stood there for a second and they heard a noise. The noise was a ruffling noise. They looked to their left and then to their right. On their right they actully seen the ruffling. Kristen ran over there and asked Karen and Camille if they thought they found him. They both said,  Yeah. Then Kristen put her hands on the ruffling newspapers and opened them up. Guess what it was Conrad he was nibbling on a piece of dried up corn. Kristen picked him up and carried him to the living room. She put him in his cage. She told him to never run away again. He went over to his food pan and sat in it but he didn't eat any. Kristen said, Why isn't he eating it looked like he was really hungry when he was in the attic''.

Karen said, did you change the food last week''? Kristen said,  No I forgot. Karen said, " Then there you go the food goes bad in only two weeks. Kristen said, " Oh''. Camille said,  He ran away because the food went bad and he was hungry so he went to look for some food that was still good. After that Kristen went to get him some more food. Camille said, I better go it's getting dark my mom is probably worried I had fun. It was a real adventure looking for Conrad. Kristen said, Thanks for helping I couldn't of done it without you guys''. Karen said, I had fun to and I agree with Camille it was an adventure finding Conrad ''. So they got their coats. Camille and Karen walked home together. Karen lives closer to Kristen than Camille does so when they got to Karen's house they said goodbye and then Camille was on her own. They all forgot about ice cream because they were to busy trying to find Conrad. That's the end of Kristen's New Hamster.

Comments:Hi Tomeisha I love your story ! I don't think you need to add any more because its so long.